Saturday, 10 May 2008

listen to a muse

ok so for the first time i have writen a song !!!!!!!!!!!!!! weeeeeeee

its a first draft so its kinda crap, i think i have the same tune most of the way through which is a bit repetitive....

basicly its about falling for someone and wanting to save them from thier insecuraties and for them to be with you. but then you love them so much you dont care about them being with you because you just want to save them and let them be happy..

aww sappy chesey song just for you hobos! (we need to change our grooup name hobo sucks)

anyways heres the song

Dawn kiss hair:


Dry pine needles burst into flame
The sound hums over frost white and grey
she can’t be bothered with this lazy arse way
But I don’t see
Why it has to be
This way
That we’re not to live today.

Can she not see? In this society.
Were we’ve gone wrong,
Playing the same game
Can she not see? It that shouldn’t be this way
Can’t you see? It’s not another working day

Dawn kiss my hair
See what I have to share
I don’t wanna be
What they think I have to be
Need to be,
Must well be.
When it could just be you and me. Now,
Dawn kisses my hair
See what I have to bare
Wont you follow me
Be with me
feel it all with me
dawn kisses your hair too

Body stiff, take my hand and come to me
Open up to your planet’s wealth it’s yours
Now take a hammer to the concrete wall and stand out of the shade.
So we can make our own land under the sun

If you don’t want to, you don’t have to be with me.
But can’t you please make your own identity.
All I want is the best for you
Open up your petals, let the sun eluminate you
Save yourself, I just want to help

Dawn kiss her hair
Give her what you have to bare
What you need from me,
Take from me,
Set her free,
she needs to be
dawn kiss her hair
see her skin its fair
(repeat 3)

Now she walks with her head held high
She wont look back I let out a sigh
Now for all the others in the dark
Let dawn kiss your hair too
We’re waiting here for you.







yay
seeya

3 comments:

Fritzy said...

I like it :)

Jeff said...

tis good

FairyFluff said...

:O


I really like it - it conjured up pretty images in my head

xxx